\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4757082
Review #4757082
Viewing a review of:
 Toodles Open in new Window. [13+]
Fairies mingle with humans
by Purple Catching Up Author Icon
Review of Toodles  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Great details! The dialogue revealed that a garden had been built and hundred of fairies showed up. Later on it revealed the fairy it was for. True to the prompt for the contest. I think everything needs to be in quotations for the contest purposes, but everything fits otherwise. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

"You made a good point. ..." instead of The devil made a good point.

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 06/15/2024 @ 1:39pm EDT
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4757082