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 The Volkswagen Story Open in new Window. [E]
Short story on a trip I took. With my parents 1964
by Timothy Otto Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Ah, childhood memories involving long road trips. Some are really long. Sometimes you can't remember them, or only remember pieces of them. Some last hours, even all day. For some, the question is; why did you travel? Could be to go visit someone you ain't seen in a while, or have never seen. Sometimes, it's simply to say, "Good-bye", one last time. In any case, sometimes the journey is what's important, not the destination.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Space between paragraphs might be helpful.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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