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Reassurance Open in new Window. [E]
Winner! 5/24 Prompt Write a story that includes the words: fish, smoke, snow Have fun!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello fellow writer. Happy Account Anniversary. I notice that you are a fan of The Daily Flash Fiction Challenge. I also like its prompts and the challenge of containing a story to a maximum of three hundred words. With this entry you earned your win. This is a great wee story. You managed to squeeze all three prompt words into two consecutive sentences. That is impressive. Within this tale's context they are not at all random.
I see no glaring spelling issues, or grammar glitches. I like that you combine an animal rescue/ownership with a romance. Three creatures share in this love.
You have created memorable characters with Anna and Mavrik. (What an unusual spelling by the way.) Their loving, giving relationship is highlighted by their love for a white fur ball of a kitten. This is not a bad way to bond.
The use of 'tirade' is a great choice. It is a word that evokes arguments, ranting and raving. When the word count is tight every word utilized has to make an impact. In that vein 'Neanderthal' is also a fantastic descriptor for a brute. Thank you for sharing your writing. It has been my pleasure to read this. Celebrating you with an Anniversary Review.
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