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Central International Airport Open in new Window. [18+]
An airport with destinations and new beginnings. Take a trip.
by Leger~ Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Leger~

I'm sending this review in connection with "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window..


*Penw* Positives

It's been a long time since I've ventured into the world of interactives, but thanks to Game of Thrones I'm reminded of how fun they can be... you know, when they're not filled with stories of growing, shrinking, unbirthing, and vore. *RollEyes*

I think an airport is a perfect setting for an interactive, because there are so many different options for where you can go and what you can do. It's really exciting to see an interactive used in such a creative way (location-based) that then opens up for other possibilities. And I think that's born out by the fact that there are nearly 250 chapters to this thing! *Shock2*


*Penw* Suggestions

The only suggestion I have... which is largely a moot point because the interactive story is clearly popular as-is... would be to next time consider creating more options to start with, so there are even more branching possibilities. For example, your first chapter starts with four possibilities of where to go, but you could exponentially increase the possibilities of an interactive by starting more generic and drilling down from there. For example, if the first installment were "where in the airport are you going" and the options were Arrivals, Departures, Security, Parking Garage... and then in the Departures branch you asked where they're going and offering "domestic, international - Europe & Asia, international - Africa & Australia, international - The Americas" ... then you'd have, again, exponentially more options to provide for subsequent participants in the interactive.


*Penw* Overall

Overall, this was a delightful interactive, and a reminder of how enjoyable they can be, given the right subject matter. *Smile*


Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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