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| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "On Being Yellow" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMA fun poem about being promoted to yellow case here on WDC.  WHAT I LIKEDWhat a heartwarming, fun, and uplifting poem! It's a nice dedication to a yellow case promotion. There's a nice beat to the poem when read outloud.  STRUCTUREThis is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. T MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I might suggest using a "deeper" shade of yellow, maybe gold or even an organish-yellow, because the bright yellow used here makes it really hard to see the words. The poem is easy to read and understand. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "Yellow is the star of the day sunshine for all to see" - It's just an uplifting description which passes out good vibes. My example isn't necessarily yellow but it's easier to read. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe title is reflective of the poem and the opening engages the reader. The poem is not overly long and hold the reader's attention well. I enjoyed the lighthearted tone and the positivity. The poem is upbeat and puts a smile on one's face. This poem is a great way to spread the yellow case on WDC. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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You responded to this review 04/23/2024 @ 9:15pm EDT