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In Her Memory Open in new Window. [ASR]
A memorial remembrance of my Mom
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon
Review of In Her Memory  Open in new Window.
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "In Her Memory" Open in new Window. from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.

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*Reading* THE POEM

The poem is a heartwarming tribute to the poet's mother.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the sweet, reverent nature of the poem. It is a touching tribute and captures the essence of a loving relationship between a mother and child.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. It gives the appearance of an acrostic poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make easier on the eyes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "The smiles we share and the tears we shed" I can easily visualize each of them sharing those important life moments, a graduation, a wedding, the birth of a child, but it also speaks to an emotional description, those undercurrent of feelings which make those life moments special.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The poem's title is reflective of the content and the opening engages the readers. The poem touches on life and death, topics that readers deal with everyday. A heartwarming tribute!

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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