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There's been a what at the school? Open in new Window. [18+]
Parents do have their stories--this is mine
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ 2025 Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A "Game of Thrones"  Open in new Window. by Gaby Author Icon Review


Storyline: The California school system leaves much to be desired in this short story of a mom dealing with the powers that be and a child who has taken it upon themselves to skip off to do some afternoon shopping. Honestly think I'd lose my mind if my children were still in a public school these days. School shootings are out of control and our lawmakers do nothing. Don't even get me started on that subject. *Laugh*

Spelling/Grammar Issues: None

Description/emotion: I loved how you told the principal what would happen with your daughter from then on. Way to go. And I agree with you about the way things were done when we were in high school. Those entitled kid today are clueless about the way the world works, and they only have their parents to blame, honestly. In 7th grade, I was in a Catholic school and saw the teacher toss a kid and his desk out the damn window for spouting off. Having a teacher sit there and tolerate the abuse, although I'm assuming there was some discipline for that student later, is beyond me.

Overall Impression: Another great story, reminding this generation of how things worked, and the stark contrast to how they work now and teachers lose everything and kids think they are the ones in charge.




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