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 Vaccine For A Klutz Open in new Window. [E]
A man who finds someone else to program his VCR
by Joy Author Icon
Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Sun* I was scrolling through your portfolio looking for a comedy, and I found this gem in a whole folder of comedy! *Wink* The title of this story jumped out at me, so I thought I'd stop by. It was a fun read and it didn't disappoint in the funny department. You did a great job with the hook in the first paragraph to draw us in with a laugh. I thought it was a good one because it's something that is a quirky thing to happen and unexpected.

*Sun* As the story continues, the unexpected keeps happening to this guy, and each snippet is timed perfectly for a laugh. The pressing of all the buttons reminded me of a few family stories, so I laughed out loud at that part. The description of the laundry fiasco painted a fun picture in my head, and I liked how it was slowly working up to the end.

*Sun* I didn't see the ending coming, but yeah, that's the perfect way to set-up a VCR. Lol! The line the neighbor says about the vaccine was funny and perfect for this guy because of all the things that happened to him. He may be a klutz, but he's smart in other ways. Lol! I liked the last line, and I think it's a phrase that should be up on the refrigerator. Fun story!

*Swords* Lornda




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