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 | Walk Barefoot in the Sand Every Day  [13+] Pieces of painted driftwood change a family's life.  |
| (4.5)  This is a "Game of Thrones" review!Hello, NaNoNette!  Overall Impression:This story elegantly captures the dichotomy between a serene, fulfilling life and the allure of commercial success. It's a poignant narrative that reflects on the consequences of our choices and the subtle ways in which the pursuit of stability and growth can disrupt our sense of home and happiness. Title and Description: The title is a beautiful metaphor for living a life true to one's nature and values. It suggests a story about simplicity and the joy of everyday moments. The description hints at a transformative journey catalyzed by something as mundane as painted driftwood, piquing the reader's interest. Hook and plot:The plot unfolds smoothly, with each segment of the story adding layers to the family's life and the eventual shift in their trajectory. The structure is well-organized, with a linear and logical progression from contentment to change and ultimately to reflection. Characters and dialogue:The characters are vividly drawn, with Curt's artistic passion and Melissa's supportive yet cautious demeanor providing a strong emotional core to the story. Their dialogues are natural and effectively reveal their personalities and evolving perspectives. Grammar and Mechanics:This is well-written, clear, and engaging. I found no problems with spelling or grammar. Final Thoughts:This may come as a surprise to you, but I'm not a fan of inspirational quotes scribed into things (: My personal opinion on Live, Love, Laugh aside, this is a story that effectively uses its characters and setting to explore themes of simplicity versus ambition and the personal costs associated with pursuing broader opportunities. It's a gentle yet powerful reminder of what we might lose in pursuing what we think we want. Thank you for sharing your work with us! JayNaNoOhNo  My approach to reviews: "I'll Explain, but not Disclaim" The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and, therefore, do not necessarily reflect the group, activity, and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.
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You responded to this review 04/16/2024 @ 7:03pm EDT