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 The Survivor of Gilligan's Island  [E]
This is who would have won if the Gilligan's Island crew played the Survivor Game.
by Maryann
Review by StephBee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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GAMES OF THRONES FAN FICTION REVIEW

This is a review for "The Survivor of Gilligan's Island from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones

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*Reading* THE FAN FICTION

A cross between Survivor and Gilligan's island - who can outwit, outlast, and outplay Mr. Howell the money man?

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I picked this item because I loved Gilligan's Island and I love Survivor, and of course I wanted to see who would make it into the final 2. This was just a fun little piece that I enjoyed!

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the third person omniscient. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* THEME

The theme is: who is going to be the last one "survivor" on Gillian island and it ain't Gilligan - he's too nice. There's a little ruthlessness involved, but ultimately the person who deserves to win, wins.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The fan fiction is easy to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title is a great fit for the fan fiction and the opening hooked me right away. What a hoot! I really enjoyed reading this and I laughed and smiled as I read it. What a fun item to find in the author's port. My suggestion for what it's worth: If anything, I suppose you could grow this out more with 1K or less entries on each "challenge" and who wins.

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