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Fairy’s Favor Open in new Window. [E]
When the tooth fairy is caught...
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Review of Fairy’s Favor  Open in new Window.
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "Fairy’s Favor" Open in new Window. from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.

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*Reading* THE POEM

A little girl loses her tooth and can't wait for the tooth fairy to come!

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

This poem captures all the excitement of the tooth fairy - it lessens the pain of losing the tooth for sure and captures all the fun of hiding the tooth in anticipation of a BIG reward in the morning. It's upbeat and uplifting.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem with ten quaterns. The 1st and 2nd along with the 3rd and 4th lines rythme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. The rythme scheme allows for nice, rich emotional beats.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "A tiny fairy, real phenom, She sat sulking on Mommy's palm." What a great visual! I can easily picture this in my imagination. I'm sure the tooth fairy was pretty mad at getting caught.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title fits the poem. The opening lures the reader in with a nice rythme scheme and keeps them reading. There are twists and turns - especially when the tooth fairy gets busted. A whimsical children's poem that would make a great "Dr. Suess" like children's book.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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