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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Creeper Of The Realm

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: Growing Up

Hi: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: A poem about growing up and the good things and bad things in life. I can relate. I decided to read this and give my review and observations. When we are young, we think we can do anything. I get this. I read on and now on to the review.

What needs your attention: Comparing yourself to a bird. Good concept. I think the words were well chosen. I can't argue with this.

Part I liked best: Being a bird. Being free. Being a bird and then it was all gone. You included the good things and how life can change quick. Some good reflections. Well chosen words. A good use of adverbs and adjectives. A bird probably feels anxiety leaving the nest like humans do starting out in life. Good call as you captured this concept.

Overall Impression. A Neat rhyme pattern puts the words into perspective, blends them together and rounds this out with a good flair. Looks like you spent time with this. This made me smile and feel sad in some spots. I have been there to bad things in my life. Heart touching. Creative and colorful. A good scenario. Impressive writing.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated within. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.