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Hi JCosmos ![]() This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" ![]() ![]() Overall Impression: This is a very interesting poem, dear author. It's unusual! It's a story, but also a poem, yet different to the poetic stories that I have read in the past. I cannot detect a specific form, nor rhyme. Well, I like things that are a little different, so here I am! Sam and his wife Maria are looking for a restaurant called Bubba’s Corner BBQ. They ask for directions. Turns out there are multiple ones, and the best one's not even on a corner. The food is very good, though! You worked with a very tricky prompt here. It's very specific and there were certain words that you could not use. I think you did well with it. Suggestions: I do have some suggestions, dear author. I hope that you'll find them helpful! Stanza 3: ![]() Little typo - driections should be directions. Stanza 6: ![]() 'our' should be Our. ![]() I suggest changing this to five Bubba's Corner BBQs. Stanza 7: ![]() 'the' should be The. ![]() Stanza 11: ![]() 'catawapmus' should be catawampus. Stanza 12: ![]() 'Ist' should be 1st. My Rating: This is an interesting piece. Definitely something different. I did have quite a few suggestions. You have something here, but it can do with another look. For that reason, for now, I will give this a rating of 3.5 out of 5. Thank you for sharing your work. Write on! Kit ![]() ![]() The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. ![]() ![]()
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