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 | The Midnight Mystery Trash Can Incident  [18+] A true story of a bizarre and slightly unsettling little encounter.  |
| (4.5)| "When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Hello Alice in Limbo! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" . Oh my goodness! What a story. This true account of a woman, her dog, and a trashcan is good, entertaining, funny, and mysterious. I do have to ask though, what's with the walks at midnight? I'd enjoy that also, but the danger of it would make me think otherwise. Enjoy your walks and stay safe!The Plot/Storyline - The story is a true account of a possessed trashcan late at night. While out on a midnight walk with her dog, noise could be heard coming from inside a garbage can. After some soul-searching and a bit of thought, it was decided to rescue the raccoon or cat. Or whatever biggish animal somehow got trapped inside! The Characters - The woman and her dog (and the creature in the garbage can). You do a great job showing the reader your humor and wit. As well as introducing us to your furbaby, dog. (Who I am sure enjoys the midnight walks very much!). We are also shown that you have a kind heart and soul. You couldn't leave that poor animal trapped inside a trash can overnight. You have a kind heart.  The Setting - You write the surroundings with great details and description. We're easily able to see the surroundings as we read. What I Liked Best - I enjoyed the whole story. But when you were able to get the trashcan lid off and see what lay inside, and the confusion that came with that was the best! Below are a few suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit.  in fact theA comma is needed after fact  life changing life-changing  river a ordinary,river an ordinary,  a traingle a triangle Thank you so much for sharing your experience with us. I truly enjoyed it! Intuey My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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