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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby ~ Way behind!

"Game of Thrones"  Hello Fellow Writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes. Title: The cozy chair that I'm not inFirst Impression: Sorry, I laughed at your predicament. I anticipated something terrible due to your question. "Whose idea was it to go camping, anyway?" You write of night falling and fearing what "in the darkness lies." You lament not languishing in your comfortable chair back home. Was camping really that rough?What needs your attention: Nothing. This reads well, no confusion.What part I liked best: I admire your form and rhyme. They are not forced. The air is light-hearted, tongue in cheek. You claim to have been seduced by a cheery tone and promises of "leafy walks" and "bonhomie." Who could possibly resist that allure? The final six lines of this poem caused me to smile. With this engaging rhyme you blurt out your camping fears. "Though you swear nothing in the darkness lies Still, I can feel a thousand hostile eyes." Just a wee bit of exaggeration? Overall Impression: This is a great poem of self-mockery. Obviously. you survived your ordeal and penned this piece of writing to commemorate it. Thanks for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure! What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1335 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions on this review are mainly things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. this is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.