Hello Hello Kiya,

This is Kristina and I am here to give you a "Game of Thrones"  review. By surfing through the Family Genre, I came across your story, The Chat. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I hope this review will be helpful.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed this story very much. It caught my attention from the very beginning and held it till the end. You did a very good job building the anticipation up slowly, but steadily. The POV was evenly balanced to make the reader feel like they were there witnessing the conversation.

Plot: This is a story about a family taking a trip together under less desirable circumstances. As Children Will Be Children, the story focuses on the power of control the older sibling has over the younger one and how she obtained it by playing off his imagination to hide her own misdeed.

Style/Mood/Tone: The author's word choice, sentence structure, figurative language, and meaning in text and voice all worked well together.

Scene/Setting: The time, place, and other setting characteristics worked well together.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: I saw no issues in this area.

Characters: The characters were well-developed and believable.

Dialogue: The dialogue helped establish the scenes' tone and atmosphere. It also revealed the personalities of the characters and advanced the storyline.

Suggestions: I can't offer any suggestions for improvement. I felt the story was well-written.

Write on!

Kristina



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