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The Golden Heart C-Note Shop  [E]
C-Notes from the Golden Hearts Alliance
by 🌞GeminiGem 🌻
Review by Jayne
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, 🌞GeminiGem 🌻!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
This is a lovely themed shop to tie in with the Golden Hearts Alliance.

*Checkb*Title and Description:
The Golden Heart C-Note Shop is a good title since it reflects the store's overall goal. The description could be changed to give the shopper a better idea of what's in the store in terms of the cards--themes, occasions, etc. I don't think it will detract from the Alliance because the shop has plenty of branding.

*Checkb*Content and Flow:
The shop's main page is easy to understand and just the right length. I like how you've indicated that anyone can send/receive animated notes (I don't think many people know that). I did notice that there's no link to the Golden Hearts Alliance (or maybe I missed it?). It would be helpful to have one if one of the shoppers wanted to know where their money was going.

In terms of the c-notes themselves, they all fit nicely into the theme. I'm a fan of the heart with floating candles, which is very relaxing. However, I think there's something in here for everyone. The "you are awesome" card is another favorite of mine, but I don't dislike any of them. You've done a great job selecting images with movement that aren't overwhelming and look polished.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
I didn't find any problems in the storefront or the notes.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
It's hard to get animated items to be flashy enough to be worth the cost without crossing into "hard to look at" territory because there's too much going on (I say this as a lover of gifs, and it pains me to admit that sometimes animation is just too much). You've done an excellent job balancing your branding, selection, and animations to meet the needs of a broad audience. Good luck with your shop going forward!

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jayne *Smile*


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