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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos.

Hi: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Car

First Impression: I saw that this was about a man and his car. The car was old and seems to still run. Looks like there is some humor here and a poem that I wanted to read. I sat back and decided to go for it. Here I am. I am reviewing this.

What needs your attention: I am not sure if the title should be about The Car. Maybe it could be called The Views From The Road or Reflections.

What part I liked best: Why does the road have possums in the daytime? Boy, was my face red when she bought out the cat. I appreciate the humor in this. The blossoms not surviving the heat. A fireside chat by the beach. Good call.

Overall Impression: A good scenario. The word prompts blended in well with the story. Easy to follow with a good tone. Creative as well as colorful. A neat rhyme pattern sews the words together and rounds this out with an impressive flair. This poem made me smile and laugh. I have to ask why was the cat bought to the beach? Heart touching the wife was the love of your love. Getting the blossoms for her. Good call even though they wilted. A good presentation. I was able to keep up. I like that.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/ or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for letting me review your work. It has been my pleasure.