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A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: Touch

First Impression: I saw this was about summer and a couple in love but are having an affair. I thought I would read and see what is going down. The poem had good reflections and got my attention. I read it and these are my observations.

What needs your attention: I wondered where did this couple meet and how they were able to get away from their spouses. This makes you want to read more.

What part I liked best: I like this that this combines summer and winter. Blossoms is more then just flowers. A good romance poem and I do enjoy romance. I appreciate the romantic sentiments and overtones. Heart warming poem.

Overall Impression: You used the prompt words well and they blend in together. Looks like you spent time with this. Do we touch? If the couple is having a relationship, they do touch. In winter, they just talk on the phone. Sad. Looks like the relationship can't go any further. The reader feels for the couple but wonders about their spouses. A good style and easy to follow. The heat of the summer, a distant memory. A blush blossoms pink on my cheek. Colorful metaphors. A good scenario and the words blend well together. This poem was well defined and looks like you spent time with this.

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