This was a fun, entertaining, romantic story. You did a great job of developing both Angie's and Andrew's characters and showing the mutual interest evolving beyond the initial physical attraction. I also like the fact that they both had interesting careers and what felt like fully-developed individual lives.

Not a huge deal, but there were a couple of points where, after "Adonis" was introduced as Andrew/Drew, he was still referred to as Adonis, which made for a bit of a confusing read at certain points.

Also, the break in the middle between the two encounters felt a little rough, as if it just jumped from one scene to the other. It would have benefitted the story to have a bit of a smoother transition with one scene leading into the other.

While I understand their significance to the story, the title "Cheese Puffs" felt a little, well, cheesy. This is actually a really compelling, well-written romance story and the title felt a little sillier than the tone of the piece. I can't help but think there's a more fitting title for such an enjoyable, elegant story.

Overall, I thought this was a fun, engaging story. It kept my interest throughout and I could definitely see the possibilities for a larger world and/or more involved narrative as I read. These are two characters that I'm definitely interested in getting to know better. Well done!