Hi there, I'm Beacon and I'm going to review your poem. I'm playing "Game of Thrones" 

When I read your poem, I could feel the emotions that comes out. I've lost my mom about year ago in March 2023 and my dad in May 1991. Losing someone is never easy and every memory that you have, you start thinking about the times, you had with him. I'm so sorry for your loss, always keep the memories you have in your heart.

This poem made me think about what I went through in my life and I've lost the most important people that were in my life. Like I said, I lost both of my parents and I was trying to reconnect with my uncle and suddenly passed, that was hard for me.

Honestly, I would try to get close to my mom, when she was alive but we never saw eye to eye on anything hardly. When my mom would contact me, I would talk to her. This hasn't been easy but I know in my heart God is right there with me.

God will be there for you and he will get you through it. I understand it's not easy and he was your brother. I miss my parents so much and my older brother is taking it hard too.

As for your writing, you did an awesome job on your poem because it made me have some tears come down as I was reading it. I would read your poems more, when you have it post it. You wrote this with emotion and I could feel it through reading your poem. I enjoyed reading it to the end of it.

I honestly didn't see any errors or misspelled words.

my disclaimer: This is only a suggestion but not required. I wrote this based on your poem.

Thank you for sharing
Beacon