Well, this is a short snippet of a story. While playing an indoor game of tennis, an important object gets broken. The one person wants to say nothing, but the other feels duty bound to tell the truth. Oh, the trouble that could happen as a result of such choices, that one must make.

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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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