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Ocean Fling Open in new Window. [E]
The mysterious disappearance of a sailboat from its mooring inspires a playful poem.
by MJones Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a cute little poem. A missing boat sparks the writer to talk about it, along with some thoughts about why it left its mooring point. Why did the boat leave? Did it see, or hear, something? A bigger question is; will it have a safe end, and be returned home? One has to wonder, as they go to watch the boats out on any body of water.

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A very cute poem that made me chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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