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 CHILDREN LEARN WHAT THEY LIVE Open in new Window. [E]
Poem on moral code for childrens
by sindbad Author Icon
Review by GERVIC Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings sindbad Author IconMail Icon !

This is your fourth day port raid as part of you "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery WagonOpen in new Window. gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review an inspiring and encouraging one.

Without much a do, here are the things I found out after reading your offering:

Implicit in the poem is the power to stop destructive patterns. If a child sees only criticism and hostility, the poem posits they'll perpetuate those. Conversely, nurturing love and support has the potential to break chains of negativity that may have plagued families for generations. This unspoken aspect is incredibly optimistic.

As the poem acknowledges children learn from both light and dark, it hints at something within ourselves drawn to the better qualities. A shy child may still yearn for acceptance, a child surrounded by hostility may still instinctively know something isn't right. This suggests that on some level, humans gravitate towards what the poem promotes, making it a message of nurturing rather than forcing unnatural change.

Consider how those nurtured by the poem's principles go into the world. They become the patient teacher, the just community leader, the compassionate friend. While an individual focus, the poem also reminds us the good we instill reverberates far beyond a single child, potentially impacting countless lives across a community.

Truly, this is a magnificent poem worth reading. It's a thought-provoking piece that bears meaningful content worth pondering upon. Thank you so much for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic


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