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Review #4725369
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The Taste of You Open in new Window. [ASR]
“Hot and Spicy” brings to mind thoughts of a very special kind. A Coloring The World Entry
by 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon
Review of The Taste of You  Open in new Window.
Review by JACE Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon.

I'm JACE Author Icon, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "The Taste of You" Open in new Window..

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I have to say, reading your offering was quite a journey. I spent your poem in three very different areas. At first, I thought your poem was about the writing of a poem.

Then the focus seems to move toward a guy who describes his undying love for his girl. Of course, by the end I find the real reason for your poem. What a ride.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I found nothing of substance that would be listed in this area.    

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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