IMHO, one cannot really critique another's "jottings," at least not for quality of content or right or wrongness. That said, I do think that if one is going to publicly share their "jottings" they should not use abbreviations, "abt," for example, and they should proofread, to catch things like a dropped "g" on the word bang, as in, "big ban," before sharing.

While I do not share any of the above thoughts, and I am not religious, I like that you shared them. I do appreciate reading opposing views as they can expand my world.

I also think you are brave putting yourself out there at such a young age.

I love your ending, your curiosity and your car rides. "Ever since I was little I've always thought abt the world like how something is made and why there's leap years and stuff like that. I used to ask my dad questions like these in car rides but now I've stopped and I think I'm answering them myself now but I honestly don't know much and i have many questions and I don't know much about science but I know simple stuff. I don't know what to write. It's hard to think of something knew if I'm only thinking about the present i might just find a place to post this all on rn."

You filled my heart with this "jotting of exploration." Just clean it up as best you can and keep sharing your thoughts . . . and most importantly, tbone, NEVER EVER stop asking questions.

Write passionately,
Cyndee



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