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 Contract of Life Open in new Window. [13+]
a demon gets the opportunity of a lifetime when a human grows sick of daily life.
by eliot schmitt Author Icon
Review of Contract of Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Wow! This is a fantastic short story. This must be taken from the personal real-life experiences of a person that are most common. Though the writer tells the story in a light mood as a story, it is a reflection of our realistic life and the subject is very serious.
It is a fact that the demons are ready to get the opportunity of a lifetime when humans are growing sick in our daily routine lives. That is the background of the story.
As a short story, it is almost perfect. The number of characters is minimum, only two.
It has a smooth pace and can generate interest in the reader's mind. Closing is also meaningful.
Despite those, I must raise a weakness that should be noted carefully. It is a bit descriptive like reporting. Just work on this drawback which you have. You will be unstoppable.

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