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It is a solid-looking poem. The subject is very striking and can touch our hearts easily. But you should concentrate on using the punctuation properly. Despite a good poem, we feel something is missing. The punctuation is creating these gaps. If you fill it up with the appropriate punctuation, the poem gets an enormous readability. Remember, it is a serious grammatical error. Please, rectify that.
Your theme is perfect. I must admire it. But do not compromise with readability. You should draw an image in front of the readers. That art will add special dimensions to your poetry. My humble suggestion is to capture that art which will make your poems popular.
It is a promising beginning. Though, a few adjustments are needed.
Have a nice literary journey.

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