Hi, I’ve stumbled across this story on Read and Review. After reading it, I was left with more questions than answers.
Would you class this piece as a vignette? A scene from a longer story perhaps?
The first time the question is asked:”Do you know anything about this?” Is this a thought or is someone else asking the question? If it’s a thought then it’s better written in italics.
If the body was already ripe and smelly, that tells me the victim had been dead for sometime. What happened in the interim?
I liked the scene, it panned out as he imagined it would, except for the fact he got shot dead, but it wasn’t the cop asking him the question: “Do you know anything about this?” It was in his head, I think, so again use italics for thoughts.
Thank you for sharing this flash fiction. Keep on writing.
Sue

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