Hi there, I see this is the first piece you have written for WdC. First of all let me welcome you and I hope you continue to write and publish here.
My first thought was how sad this piece is. Written by someone in a very lonely and self loathing place. Is this autobiographical? If so I’m so sorry your feelings are so dark. Maybe we all have thought we go through the world pretending to be something we’re not. It’s actually imperative sometimes to hide our true selves. We must go through life, if we’re to be accepted, following certain rules of life. Being polite, keeping our real thoughts to ourselves. I often think I’m pleased there aren’t such a thing as the thought police or we’d all get arrested!
You’re thinking you’re different to the rest of society but you’d probably be surprised at the number of the population who feel as you.
We seek to hide in our own homes, close the door behind us and just be ourselves. This was a difficult piece of writing to read and I’m sure for you to write. I hope you use this forum to get your thoughts out where they belong in the fresh air and out of your head.
Just one suggestion Re the font size to make it easier on old tired eyes to read please use a larger size. I think the default here is 3 but size 4 is much better.
Good luck in the future.
Cheers Sue


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