Great story plot, but far too many mistakes. you repeated 'especially' twice at the beginning. You spelt 'heels' as 'heals'. Instead of saying 'handy', you said 'hand', and I'm afraid to say that was the first paragraph.
On the next paragraph, you didn't do anything wrong, and the third paragraph was perfect and so was the fourth paragraph. However, on the sixth paragraph, you forgot the full stop at the end of the sentence. Also after 'suddenly', you should have put a comma. If you go back through and edit, I'll come back and give another review. Keep posting.

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