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 Journal of Frights Open in new Window. [13+]
The prelude to my Journal of Frights.
by C.T. Golden Author Icon
Review by DragonPrince Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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The story wasn't bad. I liked the fact that you were explaining how people become werewolves, and I guess you did a fair bit of research on these creatures. I liked the story and the fact that he had to get a human to record his life, since he was one of the wolves. I guess he couldn't hold his werewolf instincts in though, since they found the body of the guy who recorded the wolf's backstory. The dialogue was perfect, but there were some mistakes, that I think you can change up.
Try avoiding words that end with 'ly'. Apart from that I liked it. Keep posting.

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