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 The Man with Two Faces Open in new Window. [13+]
Promptly Potter. Day Seventeen.
by Elizabeth Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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The title intrigued me since I'm a Harry Potter fan and the brief description confirmed the connection!

The title, brief description and genres work. While the layout works as is, you may want to consider WritingML like font, size, center, linespace.

The poem covers various aspects of an emotionally abusive relationship very effectively, with rhyme and rhythm, and bringing out what the title evokes. Great job!

Suggestion:
While the rest of the poem reads very smoothly, the rhythm seems to go a bit awry in the last two verses. Perhaps you'd like to read those aloud and decide if you'd like to tweak those a bit.

Thanks for sharing this one!
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