It seems there is a huge storm within your story. The characters are believable, the scenes are seeable in my mind, and the plot is decent with a lot of potential. I understand this was written for a contest and that you probably had a word count limit, but with careful editing you can make this event clearer by changing some words and rearranging them. You could use something like this [looking between Agent and Kitty and slamming her palms...This brings the action to what is happening now rather than in the past. Doing something like this for the story will bring the reader into it and keep them interested in learning more about the characters and events.

I read the opening paragraph several times to understand who was doing what and how. This left me wondering why Kitty wanted to steal Athena's Jacket. I continued to read the story.

Athena's jacket was stolen by Kitty because Agent distracted her, correct?

You wrote a nice story with interesting characters and conflict between Athena and Kitty with Agent seeming to be more neutral yet willing accidentally or on purpose to distract Athena.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .