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Review by ruwth
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


♡ HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" â™¡



Maddie Sunshine Stone, Happy WdC Account Anniversary! As I visited your port in honor of your one-year WdC Anniversary, I was drawn to: "12 Days of Christmas Music Challenge" . I am a Christian so I thought there might be something in this folder I would enjoy reading. I was right.

You shared this youtube video for 11 Drummers Drumming:




I was so blessed! I love this song and I love Pentatonix. I think Pentatonix's acapella renditions are amazing and this is one of my favorites.

Embedding the video was the perfect opening for your entry. You likely introduced others to this group and this song. And choosing this song for Day 11 was perfect!

Your brief entry served the purpose for the activity but, since this is a review, let's consider how you could have made your entry better...

More.

Give us more.

You could have expanded on the things you wrote. When did you first hear this song. Did you see it then as well as hear it? What was you family's reaction when you first shared it with them?

You might also have shared what the message of the song means to you, personally. I love the message of the song. It was a song we listened to every Christmas during my growing-up years.

Anyways, I hope my suggestions will spur you to expand future entries of this type.

Thank you for sharing this with us...




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~ ruwth thanks Sum1 Is Home ~



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