This is an interesting vampire situation because of the apparent harmlessness I see in your words.

It is extremely difficult to read your poem because of the color of the font. Something black or something very dark would be better.

I enjoyed the ideas of your poem, but I found it a bit awkward to read perhaps because I do not read this type of poetry often. It seemed choppy to me.

This will work well as a good poem to read on Halloween because it has that spooky essence. I like the idea of being friendly rather than unfriendly as many Halloween stories seem to be within the plot structure.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .