Hi, my name is Ned and this review is based on my personal impressions and opinions. Feel free to take what you think is useful, and ignore the rest. This is just my way of letting the author know how this reader reacted to the item being reviewed.


TITLE: The title fits well, it is a neat way of describing the subject of the poem.

FORM: The poem is written in a series of seven couplets.

RHYTHM/RHYME: The rhythm feels even and steady and there are no awkward lines but all the lines and the rhymes flow well.

IMAGERY: This poem is all abut creating imagery as the purpose and joy of writing. The author is exploring the places and things one can experience in writing.

FAVORITE LINE(S): "As I write this poem, my place expands". This line really encapsulates the freedom involved in writing. WRiting allows the author to create his/her own place regardless of the actual place in reality the author inhabits. Writing creates new places and expands horizons. This is a very good line.

SUGGESTIONS: I don't disagree with your choice of genres except I think you missed an opportunity to choose "writing" as a genre. As writing is the subject you explore in this poem, I might exchange either "Community" or "Entertainment" for "writing".

OVERALL IMPRESSION: I could relate to this poem as it describes the process of writing as one of world-building and the blank page as the foundation upon which the writer builds that place that feels that it is created just for the author but in fact, spurs the imagination of the reader as well.

Nicely written.

You responded to this review 09/06/2023 @ 4:50pm EDT

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