Hi Kåre เลียม Enga ;

I have the chance to read and review your poem as I took a chance on Read & Review for a whopping deluge of gift points. I think it's a birthday celebration thing as each one I have done has garnered me with a good mittful of gift points.

I can see why your poem would not be published in any official brochures for the University of Kansas. Though it did give me a wee laugh. The more I read it the more tantalizing it is.

I am also doing this review as part of the Birthday Review Challenge and I am required to come up with at least one suggestion for your piece. I find this difficult to do as the piece is quite good, despite its sexual innuendo.

I don't see any spelling issues. The most I could suggest is to maybe center the poem and see if that form may push your poem further.... yikes.

It really must be quite the sight... and I dare say, I will look at another bell tower without the memory of this poem tickling the back of my mind. Not sure if I should thank you for that or not.

Either way, thanks for sharing. Enjoy the birthday week.





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