Hi Sumojo ,

I had the pleasure of reading and reviewing your piece for the No Dialogue contest as it came before mine in the Twenty-three in Eleven Forum.

I felt the emotion of this piece. I loved the ending with the dog... though I worried where the dog was during the party...

This line could benefit from some edits... if you still have time before the contest closes:
"The last patrol finally car left the street, giving a farewell whoop as it rounded the corner."

I think you did a great job doing this without dialogue. Good luck in the contest.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .