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Hello, ~ Brian K Compton ~ . This is a review from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" ! *Smile* I received "Invalid Item"  via the random 'read & review' button. I have the following comments to offer.

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Harvesting Mr. VanRemorder’s potato crop is hard work. When Jessica curves into view the work becomes something different though. But is she out of his league?...


*Quill*Commentary: Content, Characters and Plot

This is my own reading of what you wrote, as it read to me, feel free to disagree with me.

Jessica is a college girl, tall, blonde, hot and all the boys have tried the oneliners on her and apparently failed. She is working the Summer jobs probably to pay for her education. She seems to be out of her lover's league but I guess that is her choice and the heart wants what the heart wants.

The son here works with his dad. He has graduated from school but seems to lack a clear path toward the future. He likes Jessica, not Suzie.

It is a mystery why Jess likes him but I guess he is not complaining.

Not sure when American college semesters start and finish but this harvest seems to conflict with the college term and the meeting in late October especially.

An engaging story with a simple theme. Two hardworking young adults find love.


*Quill*Mechanical issues

Nothing major was found.


Thanks for sharing.

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