We have had blue skies for several weeks. Some rain would be helpful. This is my first thought while reading your poem.

I was challenged because I had to reread the first stanza of your poem so it flowed smoothly. The second reading I did was much better.

I was able to see through your words the scene, but I would have liked to know more about the color "blue" For example was it a light blue or tinted with gray? Was it the kind of blue that seemed to wrap itself around emotions because it brought out the details of a spectacular day?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .