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Rides, Cookies and Dresses Open in new Window. [13+]
Show, don't tell. Can you guess which emotion? 283 words
by Kalistra Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What a beautiful Monologue it is! We understand that the narrator is a lady who is alert about herself. She wants to remain attractive in others' eyes. So she is very much careful with her look-ups and dress senses.
Some of her mates try to copy her but do not become the central attraction. They do not have the same dedication as her. Therefore, do not try to copy anybody. Try to explore your best.
It is a lovely creation. I hope your creativity will entertain us in future endlessly, too.

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