Hi TJ, This oldy "One Cloudy Day", popped up on Read and Review. You probably have forgotten all about it but I'm here to remind you and share my thought.

First Impression The poem on the page looks easy to read and the title sounds sincere. Why not?

Frame Written in 5, iambic tetrameter, rhymed couplets.

Texture, rhythm, word choice, and sonics Because of the meter and rhyme this sounds pleasantly like a song. (but not sing-songy) The tongue-in-cheek humor was a welcome surprise.

Suggestions No technical erro jumped out at me. I see nothing I could suggest to improve on.

Overall This was a delightful break in my day. And yes the sun is shining on me too after several cloudy days. Thank you for the enjoyable read.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .