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 Divine Heart (4): Walking with Demons Open in new Window. [13+]
Different men voyage on a ship on their own interlocking quests
by Starmic Suebear Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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It is indeed an action story. It is an exciting story, too. Before the last, no one can guess what will happen next. There are a lot of characters in this mysterious story. But, ultimately, Babenlo and Vaz. The baby is also an important character. His presence helps to separate Babenlo and Vaz from the other characters.
After seeing that baby, The wild nature of Babenlo awakened. He tried to murder him. At the same time, consent Vaz roused. He attacked Babenlo from behind to stop him. He not only stopped but also died. The demon has to pay heavily for his sin.
The writer used the most uncomplicated words and drew some excellent pictures of nature. The pace of the tale always remained excellent. It gives fantastic readability. Continue this performance.
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