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Life is hard.
by DestinyAwaitsDarling Author Icon
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WOW.

I was looking for a newbie to review for an activity, and came across this poem. The title and brief description intrigued me, and I clicked. The genres work, too.

The poem talks about how things change, and how people who are connected lose touch. There is some introspection about why people have left the poet's life.

I could sympathise with every word in this poem, and all the emotions came through clearly. Your verses come straight from the heart, are honest and delve into the whys of various broken relationships.

While I look at friendships as long-term relationships, I can understand where you're coming from and comprehend how painful it might be. What is positive is that you're able to capture the feelings and put them down in words, this helps to clarify and perhaps to heal. Hopefully, writing will also help you find some answers.

As a reader, what I can say is - hope is a good thing. Don't overthink, don't blame yourself unnecessarily - just go with the flow.

About the layout of the poem - might I suggest some WritingML - font, size, line-spacing.

Thank you for sharing this!
Write On!
- Sonali.

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