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WOW!
What powerful imagery you evoke! I actually felt your words tingle down my spine! The very first words - comparing the spiral staircase to the thoughts - had me. Then one image, and its emotion, followed each other in turn. The words chosen echo the mood perfectly.

The only suggestion I'd make is where you rhyme 'insane' and 'train'. Somehow that is less impactful than the rest of the poem and 'train' seems to have been chosen only because it rhymed.

And I have a question - in the last verse, I didn't quite get the reference to 'except the middle way'. What does it mean?

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On!


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