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Greetings BlueMoon ! Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by In the manGer(vic), He sleeps and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Overview: Your poem was listed under the VIP section of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" and I'm here to deliver to you my review. Also, this review is part of your Extravagant Surprise package from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon" . Title: "Weather-traffic" suggests something at a first glance. The reader would think that it will be something about a comparison poetry or a double acrostic and yes it's the latter as what you described under the description. Good one. Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: The emotion is about peoples dislike on traffic and much more during bad weather. Also, you are angry about people not following the traffic signal, those people who hastily overtake others even when the signal is colored green. In addition, the writer appears to be exhausted after driving though a traffic and nasty weather. Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: The form is Acrostic Poetry, not Double Acrostic as what you described under the description section. In double acrostic form of poetry, the word TRAFFIC must be spelled out using the last letter of each line. No specific rhyme scheme and set meter. Artistic Voice and Imagery: Imagery is vivid. I can see every scene and detail of your brief narration. Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: Your description says "Double acoustic poem". It has to be Double acrostic poem. However, the piece doesn't appear to be a double acrostic. I would say it's only an Acrostic poem for WEATHER. In line, (Not)All people are craxy but sometimes..., it should be crazy. Favorite Lines: None. Suggestions: Please correct the description and the typographical error. Final Thought: A good piece. Thank you for sharing this. Write on! Reviewed by: In the manGer(vic), He sleeps My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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