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 Lost & Forgotten Open in new Window. [18+]
Lost and forgotten. Memories and ghosts
by Fran 🌈🧜‍♀️ Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Sun*Greetings Fran. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]Open in new Window.. Great to see you!


*Flowerr* Wow! This sounded so much like our covid times and I thought of those in hospital or nursing homes who could not receive visitors or those in isolation. How sad. Then I saw the prompt picture. LOL Yep, very dark.

*Butterflyb* The poem was moving and I was drawn into the tone and mood. It appears to be a free style poem though I liked the rhyme scheme in the first two verses and then it changes in other verses. I was just surprised the rhyme was inconsistent.*Smile* Still I enjoyed the soundscape with the good use of assonance and consonance throughout.

*Dragonflyo* The imagery is vivid with evocative lines like "the ones time froze", "the machine" and "blackness seeping and the idea of "distraction." Descriptions were clear in creating a dark vibe. I found a lot to think about in this poem and appreciate when I can enter into my own reverie while pondering your vision. *Thumbsup*

*Star*Thanks for sharing your vision and craft. It is good to see you back!

Write on in your style!
eyestar
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