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Hello marymuses,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli 🧿 ☕

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

What a lovely poem!! The title is intriguing and then the first quatrain hooks the reader. The mystery and story deepen with each word that follows, pulling me in, leaving me mesmerized.

While this poem speaks of a mystical journey, it can also be related to anyone as they come into their own to embrace their destiny.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

No errors were noted.

Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry and please, keep writing!!!



Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .