Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" 

Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because it's your WdC anniversary.
The title and brief description made me click on this immediately! I guess you've captured what a lot of us wish for!

The staccato tone of the poem – the verse structure and words chosen – echo the feeling you want to express. My favorite phrase is 'the alarm of responsibility'.

At one point, I smiled, empathizing with the feeling of not wanting to get out of bed. But then, it grew heavier and hinted at a deeper sadness than just work-day blues. This indicates a weariness that goes beyond the physical or emotional, to the existential level. Or am I reading too much into it?

The title, brief description and layout work for your message. I'm wondering about the genre — you've chosen 'educational'. That choice intrigues me!

Write On!



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .